Colorado and high school

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ok this is my first storybook.....

here's the plot...

It takes place in a small town in Colorado. I'm thinking of calling it Spooky Ridge, Colorado, because of all the spooky things happening around town. The time is in early October, and its getting near Halloween. In Spooky Ridge, thats a big deal because lately their have been a few kid turning up missing. (the kids are all ages, 6-19)

thats all ive came up with so far but Firearis is going to put up the rules in a few...
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Hi!

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RULES:

You can have up to three characters

No God-modding

No killing other characters without permission from their creator

Rich people tend to be the only ones with pets, but your character might find one or something

No sex scenes

Try to keep the cursing mild


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Name: Zaquoya

Age: 15

Eyes: green

Hair: black

Height: 5'8

Pet: Male Lion named Yameo

History: When her family kicked her out, she took her lion and items with her and moved to Spooky Ridge. She lives on her own, she is quiet and mysterious. She has a secret ability that nobody knows about
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[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

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Name: Satika

Age: 15

personalitly: shy keeps to hersel she secretly has the ability to talk to animals..(notwe here you can have 1 power)

history: orphaned

look: purple green eyes with below the waist raven black hair, she is indian.

pets: yes it is a wolf. Her name is Mika. she has been with satika since she was orphaned
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Name: Ryder

Age: 17

Eyes: Light Blue

Hair: Blonde

Height: 6'2

Pet: Huge great Dane/ German shepard
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Name= Keira Brisque

Age= 17

Gender= Female

Hair= Dark red, often pulled back in a pony tail

Eyes= Amber

Ability= Invisibility

Personality= Mischevious and responsible for half the ghost sightings in the town.

History= Keira grew up in the town and a near death experience four years ago (she almost drowned) resulted in a change in attitude. Until then she was quiet and reserved, using her power only to avoid others but now she is adventurous and reckless, using her power day and night to disrupt the town.
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<< I suggest everybody puts the name of their character at the top of every post. >>

Zaquoya



Zaquoya was walking through town. Many people would stare at her, she hated it. Yameo walked at her side, his stomach grumbled. They walked into the butcher and to the counter.

"Give me all the scraps and extra pieces of meat." Zaquoya said quietly.The Butcher was gone for a moment before coming back with a back filled of extra meat that people wouldn't eat. Zaquoya came here and did this almost every day. She paid the man before taking the bag and leaving. She turned around a corner and dumped all the meat out, allowing Yameo to eat, then she noticed someone was staring at her.
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard appears "We have weasels now!"
[Firearris] 10:45 pm: askes the guard for the weasel!
[Griffinkeeper] 10:45 pm: The guard gives Firearris the Weasel.
[Firearris] 10:46 pm: aquires the weasel and renames it "Cat"

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Name: Bella
Age: 16
Race: Vampire
Appearance: http://cures.deviantart.com/art/Girls-17174724 Only think a little more punk/emo/goth/abnormal. Her hair is black with red tips, to match her red eyes. She goes almost everywhere with her hat.
Personality: Keeps to herself when it comes to actually talking about herself, but is very opinionated about everything else. is an excellent leader.
Pet: A large wolf named Remus, who Bella found and healed after it had been horribly torn up. The wolf has Bella's vampire blood in it's veins, and they are permanently bonded. Remus and Bella can communicate via telepathy.
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Since i used to live in a small town in Colorado, and since this storybook looks cool, i'll join. ^^

Name: Ariel
Age: 15
Gender: Female
Eyes: They change depending on her mood. If she's happy, they're a dark brown. If she's upset or hurt, they're a incredibly light green. Everything else falls between.
Hair: Dirty blond, though more brown than blond. She usually keeps it up in loose pigtails, but if not, it comes down to just below her shoulders. She has side bangs, though they've grown long and she usually has them tucked behind her ear.
Height: 5' 6"
Abilities: She can communicate with others using her mind and she can create a small spark of fire by snapping her fingers.
Personality: She is shy and stubborn. She mumbles a lot when she talks, but is not afraid to voice her opinion in a matter. She doesn't speak a lot, but when she does, she has something meaningful and worthwhile to say. She has a good sense of humor and wit about her, and is great fun to be around. She is great at giving advice and is reasonable and understanding and is much more mature than her age.
Pets: A small ferret that sits on her shoulder. She holds an odd bond with it, allowing it to talk to her but only her.
Other: Her clothing usually consists of plain blue-jeans, layered tops, a blue and white stripped jacket, and black converse. Oh, and don't forget her blue/gray/black plaid army style hat.
Pics: http://shilin.deviantart.com/art/Commis ... e-45454934

Name: Ethan
Age: 16
Gender: Male
Eyes: Gray flecked with violet and light blue
Hair: Black with electric blue streaks here and there. Short and spiky.
Height: 6'
Abilities: He can create small illusions and hold them for up to ten seconds.
Personality: He is charming, outgoing, intelligent, secretive, mysterious, and cunning. He is fiercely loyal to his friends, though wary of strangers. He is sarcastic, and doesn't like crowds at all. He has a temper, but it takes a lot to bring it out.
Pets: A small black cat with a white spot on it's chest and white whiskers.
Other: He is new to town. His usual clothes consists of a dark gray jacket and dark jeans. He also has a green pendant he wears around his neck *Has been claimed by Bella's character
Pic: http://rinian.deviantart.com/art/Mister ... e-58591593 (Blue in the hair and gray eyes)

If two characters isn't allowed, just say so and i'll get rid of one.
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Name: Diane Cotton

Age:16

Gender: Female

Eyes:grey-green

Hair:long, light brown, in ringlets. Always leaves it down, but sometimes wears a long purple or blue hairscarf in it.

Ability:telekinesis

Personality: Stubbourn, impulsive, determined, secretive, tendancy to get into arguments, suspcious.

History:Diane lived with her mother until she was fourteen, at which point it was decided that she was too much of a handful, and she was sent to live with her father. He imposed many rules, which she blatantly ignores.The only communication they have tends to be in the form of arguments. She wants to leave, but has nowhere to go. She's had a couple of slip-ups in that she tends to use her power when she loses her temper, without thinking about it, and is trying to keep better control of herself.
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hey guys we need more boys......


name: Ben

age: 16

ability: he can read minds

pet: an oddly silver sberian tiger, it has silver and black stripes. tigers name is Speed. fericly loyal to Ben. he protects anyone who is near Ben.

Personality: energetic, funny, handsome, loyal to his friends, stands up for the hopeless. worries about everyone close to him.

Appearance: handsome, has jet black hair cropped short. has these unbelievibly light blue eyes. (sorry guys Satika done claimed him...) usually wears regular jeans and a tight fitting T-shirt to show his muscles. Muscular built, but not too showy.

Other: he just worries to much....


ok i think we can get this started.....

Satika:

Slowly rising, Satika watched as Mika ran happily through the feild, unleasing any uneasiness from any of the past years.

Almost full grown but yet hes still a pup. She thought to herself. Soon hell have to leave me..... she couldn't even dream of Mika ever leaving her. Just the thought hurt.

Just as she started to walk over were Mika, who had finally worn himself out, she heard someone calling her name. Turning around, she saw Ben, joggin towards her.

"Satika!" he patted when he finnaly reached her.

"What?" she asked.

"I've been looking everywhere for you, another kid just disappeared!" As he said this, she could tell he was really scared. Already 4 kids had gone missing.

"Well, do you know who it was?" she asked as he fell against the tree.

"Yeah it was Cindy Lou! You know the one from school." Shocked, she fell onto the ground. Cindy Lou had been her friend since Satika first moved here.

"Oh God! What are we going to do?" she replied.

"Only time will tell Satika." He said as he sat beside her, and wrapped her in a huge bear hug as her tears started to fall.

Mika! Mika come here. She pleaded silently. Ben still didn't know of her ability yet, but seh would tell him soon.......
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Keira

I chuckled softly to myself as I reached the safety of the woods. There, I turned visible and began to walk at a casual pace towards the school.

A good morning's work, I thought to myself, picturing the expression on the man's face as his flower pots rose into the air and floated across to the windowsill. And then the hose chasing him around the garden? Classic.

The walk to school was soon over and I entered the building, going straight to my locker.

"Did you hear about the girl?" one student whispered.

"Another one?" Someone else asked.

"I hear she was murdered!" A rather vindictive, masculine voice declared confidently. I shuddered. Practical jokes was one thing but people diappearing really spooked me out. Unless that person was me of course. Then it spooked everyone else.
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Bella--

Remus padded into the house, sitting at the edge of my bed and staring at me until I woke up.

Yes? I asked telepathically, climbing out of bed. Even as a vampire, I had grown use to the lifestyle of a human.

Someone else has gone missing. I have yet to find a trail. I had been using Remus, my wolf-friend, to try to track down the missing children. As much as I disliked other people, children didn't deserve to just disappear.

Sighing, I pulled on my clothes. Remus, even as a wolf, was polite enough to turn and look the other way. Then, I ran downstairs, grabbed a pop-tart, and headed out the door for school.
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Ryder-

Ryder walked into the school, they allowed the animals in now if they didn't fight incase whoever were taking the other children wouldn't be able to get any of them. He looked down at Camo,

Another day of torcher boy. He sighed, Camo growled in response.


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