Sword of Truth

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Ok, i figured that since i just started in the series of the Sword of Truth, i would try to make something fun outa' it.
Now for the story line.

Ok, in this storybook, there are the west land, the midlands, and the D'haven lands.
In the west, they do not do magic, and wish to stay away from it.
The midlands are mainly made up of humans and other things that wish to do good magic.
The D'haven lands are the place that they study dark and evil magic of the underworld, or the Keeper.

In this storybook, you will be made to choose your side, and fight for what you believe. Just for future knowledge, if you are born in the Westlands, that does not automatically mean that you have no magic abilities, but it does mean that if you wish to use them, you must cross the boundary.

The boundaries are set up between each of the lands. An old Wizard named Zedd, i know its a wierd name, but the real one is too long to put down, and i dont remember it, so bear with me. What he did in essence was latch part of the under world to the earth. The only safe place in the Boundary is the passageways that a scarce few know about.

Now. There is an evil man named Darken Rahl. He is attempting to take over all the lands, by commiting his soul to the keeper of the underworld. In doing so, he gains much magical power. But before he has all the power he wants, he must collect the boxes of orden. There are 3 in all. Open 1 and you gain the power you wish for. Open 2 and you kill yourself instantly. Open 3 and you annialate all of living exsistance. You may choose who you fight for, Darken Rahl or the Patriots(sorry, cant think of a better name for them)

There are many different creatures you can be in this story. Ill name off some, but i will explain what they can do later in the story.

Confessors

Seekers

Wizards

Sorcerers

Assasins

Humans(of course)

Sorry, but there can be only 1 seeker, and 5 confessors. Wizards have 3 levels, 3 being the worst and 1 being the highest. Ill show different types of creatures you can later be in the story.
Rules. Not my strongest point, but here goes.

No god-modding.

No killing other characters without there approval.

Try to keep it to one profile, if need be, you may add 1 more, just keep it at that.

I dont really care what you do, just as long as it keeps the story going.

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Name:James
Age:34
Creature:Unknown
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Personality:Fun loving, outgoing person who everyone wants to be around. Everyones best friend no matter who you are.
Background.: Is a forest guide, and knows many of the most beautiful spots of the Westland. His mother died of sickness when he was seven, and now has his father and an older brother.
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Not a bad idea! I'll have to read this series!

Name: Karana
Age: 19 years
Creature: Assassin
Appearance: tall and lanky, but with obvious curves and muscle; has reddish blonde hair she keeps in a horsetail; has blue-grey eyes; usually wears brown outfits
Personality: Quiet and careful, but is very thoughtful and quick-minded: a strategist. She is compassionate to her comrads once you gain her trust, but she has a quick and nasty temper.
Background: Is the only female in her family. To prove that she can do as much and as well as her father and brothers, she has gone undercover and is currently posing as an elite of the Darken Rahl. To do so, she had to learn dark magic and use it in place of her elementals.
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(Dude, I've never read the story, but it sounds cool so . . . . .)

Name: Tim Jones Leigh

AGE!: 13

CREATURE: Mother:Assasin, Father: Confessor. Assasfessorconin?

Appearance:Average height, green eyes, gold hair (which curl abundantly around his head), always wears (for some reason) black and white . . . and occansionally red and yellow.

PERSONALITY: Delightful, cheery, optimistic, happy, smart (in a dumb way) and LOVES to be mischievous.

BACKGROUND:(Since a confessor sounds much like a torturer . . . which i think it is) Tim's father is a Confessor and his mother is an Assasin. His mother was caught in an assasination and the Confessor was infact Tim's future dad. His mother never gave anything away; even when he violated her rights. He kept her in a cell for a whole year and was surprised to see her with a baby. (TIM!) He immediately executed her and unable to kill his own child thrust him in to the hands of another creature. Tim grew up Midlands and know a little magic. He is currently angry about the fact that he was abandoned, so he is heading to the D'haven Lands to get pay back.
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(The story sounds extremely cool. I'll have to read it.)

Name: Tama

Age: 14

Gender: Female

Creature: First Wizard

Appearance: http://s115.photobucket.com/albums/n297 ... arzsln.jpg

Personality: Shy, Angered-Easily, Easily Annoyed, Doesn't like old people, rude to older people, kind and friendly to people around her age.

Background: When she was born to the time she was twelve she lived in the D'haven lands. Now she comes back and forth from the Westlands and Midlands.
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The wizards name was Zeddicus. :wink: (Question: Is Zedd going to be part of the story? Or just his name?)

I've read a few of the books. I'll join.

Name: Elijah

Age: 21

Gender: Male

Race: Second Wizard (Wizard of the second level, nearing First)

Land: Westland

Appearance: Dark blond hair that falls to his jaw line and curls slightly, dark brown eyes that appear black, and a slim but muscular build. His facial features are soft and curved. His skin is tan. He is slim but slightly muscular and graceful.

Personality: Independant, stubborn, witty, and loyal. He doesn't make friends as easily as most people, but he is fiercly loyal and trustworthy and will lay down his life for them. He is ambitious and not easy to take advantage of. He has a temper but usually keeps it hidden and under control. If he doesn't like you, he will seem dark and bitter in your presence.

History: Grew up in D'haven lands with his father, mother, and older brother. One day, when he was five, some 'accident' occured and his father and brother were killed. His mother took him and fled to the Midlands and soon afterwards died, leaving on his own. An old wizard (Zedd) found him no more than a year later and took him in, teaching him about magic. Then, Zedd traveled to Westland right before the boundry went up. Elijah was forced to follow, and is now forbidden to use his magic. He is searching for a way out and back to the Midlands.
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His full name is Zeddicus Z'oll Zorander I believe. I guess I'll join. And they are not creatures. They're human beings like you and me but with abilities.

Name: Ricahrd Rahl
Age:30
Gender: Male
Type: Seeker and War Wizard (If that's ok)
Land: New Wolrd: Midlands
Appearance: Dark brown hair, wears War Wizard clothing and the Sword of Truth at his side.

If you're not okay with a Seeker and a War Wizard just say and I'll be a War Wizard or just a Wizard.
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His full name is Zeddicus Z'oll Zorander I believe. I guess I'll join. And they are not creatures. They're human beings like you and me but with abilities.

Name: Irlam
Age:30
Gender: Male
Type: Seeker and War Wizard (If that's ok)
Land: New Wolrd: Midlands
Appearance: Dark brown hair, wears War Wizard clothing and the Sword of Truth at his side.
History: Only known by himself and won't tell anyone.

If you're not okay with a Seeker and a War Wizard just say and I'll be a War Wizard or just a Wizard.
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Well if your going to be a seeker and a war wizard, then you might as well be Richard Rahl, cause as you know, you just kinda discribed him. Maybe, you can have Zedica whats his face. Lets just call him Zedd, it makes it a lot esier.
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So when do we start?
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Ill probly start it up Sat. Morning. So be ready for it! I would start it now, but my bus comes in like 3 mins.
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Yay! (waves at Ariel)

Name: Bella

Age: 20

Gander: female

Race: Second Wizard

Land: Westland

Appearance: Long black hair that hangs to her waist, normally loose, or held back with a golden hair clasp. She is tall, with fair skin. Her body is thin, and she doesn't look nearly as strong as she is. Her eyes are an abnormal shade of violet. She always wears her mother's cape, which is black to most. Those who are magic see it as violet, and realize that she is magic as well.

Personality: Prefers to keep to herself. Bella is very outspoken, but only if necessary. She listens to others, but is very stubborn when she thinks they're wrong. If she doesn't like you, she'll beat the crud out of you. If she does like you, you have a trustworthy friend.

History: Her mother was a powerful wizard, but didn't wish to use her powers, so she fled to the Westland. Bella was born there, and hates it with a passion. She has learned, practiced, and bettered her magic in secret, and is hoping to find a way out soon.


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I'm leaving for the weekend but will return Sunday afternoon. Just to let you know.

*Waves back at Bella and winks*

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*Okay, lets get this thing started!*

Being a forest guide, you end up knowing just about every inch of the westland, and the inhabitants. Looking up at this monstrous creature, he was sure that it was not a local per say.

The creature stood at about 12 feet tall. It had wings, and a giant pink belly. With out realizing it, his hand moved up to swat away the flies biting his neck. 'Blood flies.' He had heard of such things in stories. When they spoke of them in whispers, he had heard that they were called Gars. Apparently, the long tailed gars were pretty stupid, but this was no long tailed Gar. Its tail was short enough that it was hard to see.

Walking slowly backwards, he could tell that the Gars eyes were focused on him and nothing else. Just as the Gar was about to lurch towards James, a pike split through it, and it fell to the ground wailing. Standing behind it was non other than Bella.
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**Unlike Sasquash, I'm going to post in first person. I hope that's alright**

Bella--

I examined the scene. I wasn't supposed to use magic. It would get me in trouble.

But at the same time, James was in danger. I was strong, but not strong enough to just through my spike at the creature. As I released it, I sent a small amount of magic with it. It wasn't a noticable about, I hoped -- just enough to get the spike through the Gar.

As the Gar fell to the ground, James' eyes fell upon me.
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Tama~

I jumped out of a high oak and landed beside Bella and James.

"Stupid old people." I sighed and quickly beheaded the large creature that layed wailing on the ground.

"You need to cut the head clean off." I growled and jumped back up to the tree's first branch. I stuck my tongue out at the two people and jumped back up the tall oak.

(I've never read this so tell me if you dont like this ^ and I'll fix it.)



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