Fact: Chuck Norris didn't cry when he read this poem.
kthanx. <3
But also because I realized, that this nightmare would never end. “Never,” I heard thousands of demons whispers echo in the darkness. Never, I repeated in my mind. Never. - Ellie Chavez
More than a poem, this sounded like friendship day text messages put together.Sounds like some similar quotes selected from an Internet site.
What is not needed is use words like "true friend" and so much use of "you".Generally what works for these types of poems is often the detailed description of your personal experiences with your friend.List times when he/she helped you cope with some real tough problems or just was present for most of your celebrations.
There should be as possible use of the word "you" at the start of your lines.
I think that it was a very well-constructed poem that reflects a lot of people's feelings, and that is how a good poem becomes a great poem. If everyone can feel and relate, then they will love it and more people will read it. Kepp it up! *gives thumbs up*
Many ask me if I see the glass as half full or half empty. Well, I don't know about you, but I see the glass as, WHO DRANK HALF OF MY MILK?!?!?!
Don't say you don't have enough time. You have exactly the same number of hours per day that were given to Helen Keller, Pasteur, Michaelangelo, Mother Teresa, Leonardo da Vinci, Thomas Jefferson, and Albert Einstein. — H. Jackson Brown
