I found your poem interesting with all your ideas about words and numbers.
It kept me interested and I found the topic unusual, yet magical at that same time.
I have nothing big to say, but i think it would have helped if you had rhymed every line with the other or the last. It would have mad it more interesting.
Have fun!
shanan-cat!
"Laugh like no one can hear you, dance like no one is watching, and love like you're going to doe tomorrow." --Unknown
