ME and I

There are things no right,

I know it.

I feel it.

Its in me,

Its in everybody,

We all know the solution,

We seldom act to make things right,

Lets get together and think,

We can make a difference.

Um... nice little speech.

Hi! Welcome to YWS!

I'm Jared, BBB or bigbadbear. Whatever floats your boat.

Yes. Together we can make a difference, so if you need an answer for a question, just PM me and I'll be more than happy to answer it! Or if you need a critique, follow the same procedure.

Also, before you post any of your work make sure to you review 2 others. The ratio to reviewing to posting is 2:1.

Welcome again. It's nice to have you on board.

BBB

Hi!

Nice introduction! ^_^

I think that the last line would go better as "So we can make a difference." but other than that, nice little piece you got there!

Welcome to the forums! Please feel free to PM me if you need anything!
~Azila~

That was an interesting little intro. ^_^ I'm not use to seeing things like that in this forum. Welcome to the site! I'm Sydney, though you may already know that from me critiquing your story already. We're glad to have you here with us, and I look forward to seeing what flavors you bring. As I said before, if you have any questions, feel free to PM me.

Best of luck with your writing!

Love,
~*Syd*~