Some People

Some people have nothing,
When all they want is something,
But they don't get anything,
Because some people have everything.

I kinda like it. Its a bit short, but it puts into words precisely something I often feel. Well done. A nice little piece, very succinctly put.

I like it, but, i think a longer version would maybe be better. Good subject choice, I also think about this.

Good work !

I agree. This is an interesting topic, and I think you could elaborate a bit. Maybe give some examples or something.

Otherwise, I think it's a great idea. It's simple, with no unnecessary flair or floweriness.

*Locked*

There are buckets of recent topics in need of critiques. This, on the other hand, is from 2004, and doesn't need to be dragged up!