Well, I suppose there really isn't much to say about this. As a rule I don't really like poems this short--there isn't enough in them to make them great and it's hard to do anything with them. It takes a seriously thoughtout high-proficiency word choice for me to even think of liking them. But, I'll give you a few suggestions anyway:
Use punctuation. On this particular poem there should be some kind of punctuation at the end of every line. Without it the words are just floating.
Also, as promised, make it longer. To me it seems like there should be a linebreak between the first two lines and the third one...but if you do that with a three line poem that just looks stupid. You have to make it longer to have a real impact...if that makes sense.
If you were trying to write a 5-7-5 haiku, you might take note that your second line has, in fact, eight syllables.
I agree with Via--it doesn't say much, but is merely descriptive. And you really gave away your meaning, that the wind carries secrets. It's much more fun for your reader to figure out the meaning for himself, so you might not want to do that.
Try NOT making each line a separate phrase. It'll flow better if you don't start every line with a new phrase--sentences can flow from one line to another.
-Colleen
"My pet, I've been to the devil, and he's a very dull fellow. I won't go there again, even for you..."
