The Blind Trombonist - new here!

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Hi everyone! I'm excited to be here and I'll be reading and reviewing as much as I can, and I'd really like it if you guys could read and review my work too. Here's a preview of what I've got!

The Reynolds Road Warehouse Mystery - First installment of the MB Detective Agency series. Four young friends are torn apart by a heartless kidnapping and the remaining three will stop at nothing to get their friend back from the culprits. I rewrote this a couple years ago, because the original was SO bad, lol. So it's not my best work, but it's far from my worst.

The Caribbean Cruise Ship Mystery - Second installment in the MBDA series. The members of the newly created MB Detective Agency are invited to a cruise ship by famous detective Noran Byrne, but what is the hidden motive behind this invitation. I wrote this in 6th grade, and it's actually really bad...I haven't had time to rewrite it, but it's essential to reading the series, so please bear with me. ^^;

The Secret of Samaria - Third installment in the MBDA series. After solving their latest case, the members of the MBDA leave their home to investigate a so-called "haunted" street to the north. One by one, their suspects start to disappear, what is the secret behind this mystery? I wrote this around the same time as the Reynolds Road rewrite, so it's ok...^^;

The School House Slaughtering - Fourth installment in the MBDA series. Returning to school in the fall, the members of the MBDA discover a kind of murder they have yet to encounter. How are they to solve a mystery when the culprit is someone who is manipulating an emotionally unstable teen? I like this one a lot, but it's still not my best, the next two are the best examples of my best works so far.

Dreams of a Scarlet Moon (NOT COMPLETE) - Fifth installment in the MBDA series. [spoiler]The MB Detective Agency is in ruins as Michael's parents have discovered the truth about his actions. [/spoiler] But with the arrival of a confusing bank robbery mystery, the MBDA has no time to worry about this predicament. Meanwhile, Zach begins to have very mysterious dreams that are certainly "unique". This is the BEST of all of the MBDA stories so far, but to read it, you do NEED all of the others read too...so sorry about my younger weaker writing style in earlier stories. ^^;

What is Love? (Short Story) - For the romance lovers out there, a young boy living in NYC doesn't understand what love really is. On New Year's Eve, however, he meets a special friend who could change his life forever. I have gotten VERY good reviews for this story in this pass, however it will be the last one I post because...I love MBDA! lol. Dedicated to my love, Chelsea Marie Smith!

So that's what you can expect from me, feel free to recommend works of yours for me to read, and I guarantee I will be reading them! ^^

~The Blind Trombonist




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Hey there, TBT (If I may call you that)! I already went through "The Reynolds Road Warehouse Mystery", and I left my comment there, if you haven't already seen it. Your others sound pretty interesting, as well.

Again, welcome to YWS! You really put yourself out there in this post. Very nice. ^_^ I can tell you must be into mysteries: something I'm horrible at. I don't really do anything else other than Romance of the seventeenth and eighteenth centuries. Those are such beautiful eras, to me. ^_^ Well, anyway.

It's great to have you here with us! Catch you around.

Lurv,
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Hey there!

Welcome to the forums! That's great that you've been doing so many reviews... I'm sure the Mods will love you for it. :lol:

Your work looks interesting! PM me if you want a review or have a question about the site.

See ya around!
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Hello! *waves and smiles*
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Hi, TBT! Welcome! wow, i can't wait to read your work. feel free to pm me if you want.

~Leanne
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Hi Trom!

Welcome to YWS!

It sounds like you have a great start on a promising writing career! :)

I look forward to reading your work (especially What is Love?)

Feel free to PM me if you have an questions or anything!

Cheers!
Via
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