Great poem. Your style sorta reminds me of my own so I was intrigued from the first line. It had a pretty good rhythm to it and most of the lines flowed nicely.
I can only imagine, how you must feel.
To know that my love for you, was never real.
Take out "for you" here, it ruins the rhythm.
Great job and keep writing, this was very good for a second poem!
The best things in life are unseen. That's why we close our eyes when we kiss, cry, and dream.
