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hey im guy13, im newta dis' place. here's a story


The boy looked around frantically, he knew that if he did not find somewhere to stay he would die in the cold. The forrest had a unwelcoming feel to it, like in its silent language it was taunting him. It said ,"Go aaway poor boy your are not welcome here!" he felt as if he wanted to go to sleep and die. But then a stranger said,"Do you need somewhere to go?" The boy said, "yes i do." then the stranger said,"then go home."




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Ahoy Guy! Welcome to YWS. My name is Captain Saint Razorblade, or Saint for short. :D

Hehe, that was a cute story. A few grammatical and spelling errors, but that's for the literary forums, eh? ;)

If you have any questions, a request for a critique, or if you simply want to chat for a bit, feel free to send me a PM! I'll get back to you as soon as I can. Oh, be sure to read the rules and be nice and mind your p's and q's and all that jazz. ;)

Hope you enjoy it here! :D

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