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He's So Gorgeous

Darren_Shan_Fan · 2007-11-13T18:20:48Z

Okay this is english homework in by tomorrow morning so I need your thoughts on how to make it better asap!!! ------------------------------------------------------------------------------------- He's so gorgeous Not even the rising sun Can beat his beauty He's so gorgeous His dazzling blue eyes Are enough to enchant a lion He's so gorgeous His face is as though It was carved by angels He's so gorgeous That when he smiles He just lights up my day He's so gorgeous When I go to sleep He's the last thing i think of He's so gorgeous When I wake up He's the first thought in my mind He's so gorgeous I can't live without him He's my one and only

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Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:46 am

Em says... · Tue Apr 01, 2008 8:46 am

Hmmm.. I do love me a good cliche!
I'd like to meet this boy one day.
Got his number?

Haha, I liked it, though, yeah, it was a bit cliche.
But I love cliches.
I dunno why..
=]

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