"Ray of Sunshine"

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You rise up everyday.
Sometimes you are covered by a dark, dreary cloud,
others, you just shine.

At night, when I am alone with the moon,
darkness and pain are my blanket.
A false comfort compared to you.

And when I stare at my enemy on the wall,
I drown in the constant Tick-tock... Tick-tock...
Tick-tock... Tick-tock

I am awaiting you dawn.
I am certain you will come.
Brightening my heart with your Ray of Hope.
Lucy




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how do you do this? consistently write awesome poems. i just love your work.
i have to wait for the writers bug to bite.

i really like the how you discribed the blanket as something sad.
again i loved reading your poems. thanks for letting me know you posted this.
kim



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