What?!@

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What?!@
Drink the words in by dozens, like honey,
dripping off the tongues of poets and onto paper,
forming puddles that resemble stanzas.

Here! an adverb,
there! and adjective.
Everywhere a crown of phrases and clauses.

In the disarray that becomes the writer,
the gloating look of pride replaced by fear, a look—
bewildered—a deer in headlights:
the statement defies all logic and comprehension.
I’ve only written three stanzas?!
Break the boundaries, hunt the hunter, and leave me a tip.
----to kill or not to kill




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Hi I really liked your poem. It was really good. Keep on writing great poetry like that.
Writing is my thang. But you can express yourself in so many different ways.




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Haha. Thanks.
Break the boundaries, hunt the hunter, and leave me a tip.
----to kill or not to kill




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I like this. It's very loud, and out there, well still being enjoyable and making some sense. The ending was one that made me smile too, which is always nice.

MERRY WRITING!
~Bella~
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart) <3

Please review my performance poem?




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Tanks Bella!

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Break the boundaries, hunt the hunter, and leave me a tip.
----to kill or not to kill



I’ll paraphrase Thoreau here... Rather than love, than money, than faith, than fame, than fairness, give me truth.
— Christopher Johnson McCandless