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This is my niece. She loves to be the subject of my photos, but this is the only one I had since it was getting dark outside.




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That's very creepy. I like the patch of light in the top corner but I think the tree should be more in focus. Great picture though and your niece is so cute!
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I think the dark worked a little against you in this one. Because it's black and white, it's hard to do a 'dark' shot without it looking too dark for it's own good. I like the idea, though, maybe just lighten it up a little with an editing program?
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To me, it looks overly posed. I think I'd like it better if your sister was sitting down to have a picnic, or playing in the leaves, or at least not looking directly at the camera.

I like the setting a lot, though. It's very pretty, and it's really nice of your sister to let you take pictures of her. :)
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Actually, that's pretty cool. It looks sort of like a shot for a horror movie poster - one of the older ones, though. All it really needs is a guy with a bloodied chainsaw lurking in the corner.

But perhaps that's not what you were aiming for. Hm...

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I like it. I think it's actually sort of creepy with your cousin not smiling and the whole thing black and white. I really think it's good.
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i like how the black and white work together, the light shining through the trees really stands out. i didnt see creepy in this photograph, i got the feeling of being alone. almost sad.

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It's a bit too dark, and I can't see it properally. :(
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The black and white is always a nice touch. She looks very sweet sitting there. It might have helped to lighten the picture and maybe unblur her face a bit to be able to see her features.
The picture is not creepy, I like it. But then i am a fav of black and white

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It's a good attempt but I don't exactly get the idea of this photo. I think that it'd be better if your niece looked away and if she did not block so much of the tree.
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It's her NEICE for God's sake people! Get it right! Not her sister, not her cousin, her NEICE. Very nice work. :)
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It's a bit out of focus, but I personally feel like it adds to the photo.

It's an eloquent shot, that much can be said. Although her face looks a little... off. I can't quite put my finger on exactly what's wrong with it. Sorry. Heh. *sheepish grin*

Anyway, I like it! I personally feel like you could crop out a bit of the tree, but hey, that one's up to you. :D

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It's kinda cool.
I like the kind of grey-sepia colouring but the tree should be more in focus. Your niece looks wicked though--she kind of has a lost expression on her face. Not emo, definitely not, but kind of lost soul-ish. If you know what I mean.
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I liked it. The black and white added a really nice touch, and the bit of light in the corner makes it really... scary.

Your niece looks older than seven, though. And her expression makes it even creepier.

Good job!
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