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Hey guys, I'm doing a small project for me right now. But doesn't mean I can't share!

I've always wanted to animate, but I never had the patience. So its good practice for both animating and patience when I animate! I hope that made sense.

But FORST, a character to work with. Click it!
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An awkward walk animation thats really awkward, Its my first one, but thats not an excuse.
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Don't mind the background, its... yeah, its fine when its not a .gif.
It has sound, but I need a more girlish voice, but you obviously can't hear it in this .gif format.
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I was thinking of a buddy - buddy type comedy. Its prolly not gonna be laugh on your side funny, but it'll do. for now.
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That's cool! I like drawing too, mostly Anime characters.
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I think it's pretty darn good, if I do say so myself! The walking animation is a little awkward, but it really kind of works for cartoons, I don't think that would be the first thing to come to mind if I were to watch a series, that the walking animation was bad. It's really very good. I like the style as well, and the second gif is very good! I don't so much like the complete white and black page with the guy, but the girl's frames are good!
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I agree with Via, it's very good and the girl's frames in the last one are brilliant. Maybe try t be a touch more consistent - her eyes and hair vary quite a lot - but it's a very good cartoon and well animated.
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Although the walking gif is awkward, it kind of fits. If I was walking on the world, I'd be walking like that too. =P

Anyways, I really like the character. Her eyes are pretty and she has that "I don't care" attitude about herself.The second animation is also great....but what's the big "bg2" there for?




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I liked the first ones the best. They made me smile.

I don't think that you should put too much of a background into the walking one - it's not conducive to the style you're working, and it might be too busy if you put in designs. A solid color would be good, if you are planning on putting in a backgroud.

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I think they're really good. The walking is a bit odd, but it fits in with the style of the drawings. They're cute and very eye catching. Great work.
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/agree, the walking is awkward, due to a slight speed difference in the right leg and groin areas.

However, if you didn't notice, the black and white is lablel'd BG2, meaning, it doesnt exist yet.
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Ooooh, this is so cool!

Obviously it's unfinished, because you can see where it's rought around the edges in certain places, but it still looks really really cool. I actually like the awkward walk one... I'm kind of hypnotized by the spinning ball...
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Updated RAWR!!!

It took 5 hours to do BG 2.

Betterized version: http://img158.imageshack.us/my.php?imag ... swfpp3.swf
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It is really cool. love anime and try to draw it but not to good.
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The 'betterized' version is great! I would suggest moving the "you're always late blah blah blah" words up some and making them more eye-catching? But the animation itself is great!
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Because the background is kinda dark i suggest a light color for the words. Other than that, wow, that is super sweet. Great job.
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That text isn't to stay forevor. I'm removing them when I get voices. If and when.
But thanks everyone for your interest! I never knew people would be interested in my stuff again >.>
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