Oceans Rise

As I stand, rooted to the floor
I feel great oceans of water
begin to rise up in me.
It rushes forth as I see your form
slowly drifting away
into the darkness.

It's short but sweet
Since I am no expert at poetry, I have nothing constructive to say...
But I really liked this line:
It rushes forth as I see your form
For some reason, it reminds me of a small, silver waterfall. And I like the way it sounds.
Congrats and good job,
Ayra

A bit short but very nice.
You could add a few extra lines you know, so that it makes a better picture of what you really want to say.

I enjoyed your poem. It was short but very good. Keep on writing.