Haunted

The sky darkens as rain filled clouds slowly drift over the blazing moon.
Lightning strikes and lights up the forest sending shivers of fear down your spine.
A fain howl splits the night in two. Approaching steps race behind you...You screech in agony and run for your life...But it is soon over as the lightning strikes.

<<Its not really a story its more of a poem...But I could not decide
Enjoy! >>

Hehee, it's pretty much a poem.

*Moved to Other Poetry*

Thanks!

It sucks... I just read it over again and it totally sucks! XD

It has great imagery. i like it. it doesnt suck. maybe you know you could do better but as far as my opinion goes i think it's good!

Thanks

I quite like it. I fond it entertaining.

Yeah, I would definitely say it is a poem! There not much I can say. It's
kinda short. XD

-- M.B.Author

Thanks
Yes I guess its a knd of poem
Thanks again!

Genevieve

it doesnt suck gwen, i actually like it. you put alot in a short space. give your self some credit, i have yet to read anything of yours that sucked lol.

kimi

its great, in my opinion.
i think you could expand on it a little.
possibly write a sequel.
but great i loved it

Thank you
I might just consider doing that!