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A chill of early morning summer sent a wave of pleasure through the villagers of Moonlight Valley. The warm suns glow rimed the treetops that surrounded the Valley. Its beauty lit up a young woman’s bronze face. Her icy blue eyes scanned the trees; they moved quickly with ease across the brown-bottomed oaks. They stopped suddenly a jolt of curiosity swirled through her expression. With a single swift movement she sprinted towards the forest with long elegant strides her muscular legs brought her forwards. Her red dreadlocks a sea of life behind her she flung noiselessly into a tree, without another thought she peered from behind the tree and smiled reveling elegant white teeth resembling more of a colorless thorns than teeth. She leaped from the trees into the air her arms outstretched before her. Her body let off an elegant white glow; she fell to the ground in the form of a muscular black wolf with long dark wings. Without a moments hesitation she pelted forwards her black paws a blur beneath her their repetitive gallop brook the morning’s silence. Seconds later she came into the view of a white haired woman. The wolf threw back her head and howled savagely before leaping onto the girl with a yelp of joy. The woman screeched and fell to the ground in the form of a blue feather lion with elegant spotted wings. She laughed as they rolled around playfully batting at each other with their large paws. The first to speak was the lioness “Gwenevire I told you no shifting” She growled. Before answering Gwenevire (the wolf) rolled onto her back and batted the air with her paws, “I know Liloo…But I was so tempted! You are so easy to catch!” She laughed and stood up. She trotted up the small mountain they had reached and peered down eagerly. She flicked her tail motioning for Liloo to come. “What is it Gwen?” She asked wryly before stepping forwards and looking down, a second later she looked up and smiled “Shall we?” Gwenevire asked with a devilish grin etched into her eyes. “Yes” She reared up on her back legs and they both dove downwards. Their wings pressed tightly against their flanks. Gwenevire barked with joy as Liloo let out a rawr of pleasure and they both let their wings out and they quickly veered back up into the sky. They turned their heads to each other and smiled daringly “YES!” They both yelled before diving back down towards the sea underneath them. They tucked their wings back and stretched out there paws and transformed back into humans. They took one last look at each other and hit the water with a giant splash. They resurfaced seconds later laughing hysterically. “That’s the best one yet!” Liloo screamed happily. They two girls looked at each other and took a big breath in before diving down into the ocean. The deeper they got the darker it got. Over the period that they where swimming they began to grow there wings back. They hit rock bottom both of there faces pink, “Wets wo” Gwenevire babbled. Liloo nodded enthusiastically and they bent their knees before pushing up their hands outstretched and their wings pressed tightly against their sides. They bolted through the water like white waves.
After a few flaps of their muscular wings they hit the surface they instantly sucked in as much air as possible before slowly paddling back to shore. Swimming felt like running on water. There legs where useless as where there arms. They got swept in by a large wave and lay panting on their bellies. Gwenevire was the first to rise, her muscle straining under her aching legs. “That’s nothing compared to the blood river…” She breathed “Not only is the water thick with blood in death but we would have to stay down there and search for the calling egg.” She groaned and began to walk back into the forest her body slowly morphing into her wolf form.
((It needs to be continued))




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((Hello?))
you just keep giving, but you never get back




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((Dies))
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((I don't get this!))




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((HELP!))
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((Well I am off! *waves* mail me if you like))
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((Staying lol))
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Ning! It's you!
everything i loved
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Lol, did you post this yesterday?
I saw how you replied to my post, thanks:)
Your writing is good! I like it!
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How come we only have 1 star each?
That's sad...oh well..
I guess you will see this later, but, I'm not sure.
I hope you do!
It's me!
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hhmmm...This website is confusing...
But we will get used to it. :)
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Heehee, we are novices! Hey guess what; someone called Faith or something has really good writing :)
I read about her moonchildren...
I wonder how you uprank yourself? I mean, get a better title than Novice?
Has anyone signed your guestbook? I will :)
:roll: I have one signature, lol.
There's cool emoticons on this site! :P
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I guess you're wondering why I can post this when I'm at school?
:( I forgot to buy tickets to the school dance and I have to go to IT, so yeah.
I don't like dancing but there's food and pop, so...:P
Anyways, how is your day going?
I'm rambling...lol. I always do that.
But yes. I pray that you will be able to see this when you are on the computer...
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What's IT?
In case you don't know...and I'm enjoying posting all these messages, even though you aren't replying. It's fun :)
It's a class at Earl Grey where you learn how to do computer deisgning. It's awesome! They teach you all sorts of URL and HTML stuff, and you can make your own computer games! :o Isn't that sa-weet?
Yes, I imagine you saying. It sounds cool. Or, you would raise one eyebrow and ask, "Sa-weet?"
I know.
That isn't the way I usually talk, but...oh well!
heehee. I'm being so stupid.
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