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Lilly and Severus

theescapist · 2007-10-21T14:15:01Z

Before the letter, Before Hogwarts, Before potions, professors, Before Deatheaters and Mudbloods, Before James, Sirus, Lupin, Peter, Before the Shrieking Shack, Before Quidditch matches and trophies, Before Harry, Before the prophecy, Before Trelawney and Dumbledore, Before the Hog’s Head Pub, Before the betrayal, Before the death, Before the scar, Before the disappearance, Before Privet Drive and the Dursleys, Before the cupboard, Before Hagrid, Before the letter, Before the beginning, But till the end, Lilly Evans and Severus Snape, “Always.” author's note: for those who have read the Harry Potter Canon, you know that Severus Snape reveals his unconditional love for Lilly, in a chapter called "The Prince's Tale." There, he shows Dumbledore his patronus- a silver doe, same as Lilly's. Dumbledore asked ,"All this time?" and he replied with, "Always." "Always." is definately my favorite quote from the whole series. It always makes me tear up... I started dissecting what that really means, not only that he loved her, but the word itself. It's a very binding word, not to be used lightly but I thought it was apropriate when we look at the journey lilly and serevus have taken. Their love has endured all most the entire canon, up until snape's death, one might say. But when you look at it more carefully, you see that their love made a profound impact on harry's choices in the chapters after snape's death. I just really wanted to share my thoughts, thank you for giving me the oppertunity.

simmy90

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Sat Jul 12, 2008 7:12 pm

simmy90 says... · Sat Jul 12, 2008 7:12 pm

Interesting idea you've got there. I've only ever been a fan of Lily/Snape fanfiction when it came down to the idea that Snape will forever be pining after her, but of course, Lily had other ideas. I've always felt bad for Snape, except in SS/PS when he was being such a git to Harry. Anyway, nicely written, but you should consider putting just commas at the end of each line. For some reason, it looks a little choppy with periods.

But great job, in any case!

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Mon Oct 06, 2008 1:04 pm

FreakyDoo12 says... · Mon Oct 06, 2008 1:04 pm

What the hell!!!

i DISAGREE, THE REPITITION IS TOO MUCH, i MEAN TO ME PERSONALLY. IN GENERAL PEOPLE WANT TO READ AN INTERSTING STORY, REPITITION JUST MADE ME BORED.

ANYONE MAJORITY HERE SAY THEY LOVED IT SO YOU WIN!!.
BUT PLEASE MAYBE IF IT WERE TO BE IN THE POETIC FORM I WOULD BE ABLE TO FINISH IT.

PLEASE TRY TO AVOID THE REPITITION SO MUCH, JUST MAKES IT SOUND LONG AND WHINY.

THANK YOU.

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