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Suzanne wrote:I have rape scenes in mine, too!


Isn't yours about a concentration camp? Or am I thinking about someone else?

Also: while writing rape you should focus on little things. Like her scraping against his skin, trying to get away, her bruised wrists, the taste of her tears. Things the victim would be trying to watch instead of focusing too much on the actual sex.
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