I don't think you should be asking people to read it in the Welcome forum. Also, if the story itself should be in the Fanfiction section, not Romantic because you quite obviously don't own Superman. Just trying to help you.
I was kind of scared to...but it got moved anyway. And I know...*bad SL, bad!*. .
"Show us, don't tell us!" They say, but sadly I realize I'm a storyteller. When I cross over and accept maturity, when I want to change then maybe I'll be willing to show people my prose and not tell them. As a writer I have to grow.
You got rid of them. Yes, that's just like you. Getting rid of everything unpleasant instead of learning to put up with it. — Aldous Huxley, Brave New World
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