Who Am I

I got bored doing nothing so I wrote this.. Tell me what you guys think.

Who Am I
Am I just a leaf,
Drifting along with the wind,
Never finding what it is like to belong?

A rock in a desert,
Reliable and steady
Yet never noticed until needed?

Or am I a mountain overlooking everything,
Full of wisdom,
But never truly appreciated?

If this is who I am,
Can I truly say that I am somebody?
Or am I just a nobody?

I liked this. I liked how you described the leaf, rock, and the mountain.
Good Job! You are getting the hang of writing poems.

-- M.B.Author

P.S.
You are not a nobody Azure! :D

Hey Azure!!This is the first time I am reading your work....and I liked it.The starting was good,and the descriptions in short was good.A nice small poem.

Keep writing and posting,as M.B.Author said "You are getting the hang of writing poems".

It is very good.

I liked it.It was very deep.

A rock in a desert,
Reliable and steady
Yet never noticed until needed?

I don't understand the last line.

Or am I a mountain overlooking everything,
Full of wisdom,
But never truly appreciated?

This was my favourite! Really well said.

The rest was good. I really enjoyd this!

Loved it !
I really like your imagery and descriptions. I look forward to reading more poetry by you.

i liked it!

nice in depth meaning!
great work

vince

Wow!!! that was really good!!! i really describes my life!!! keep writing, when your bord! lol!

this was great, I loved the way you described everything!
very nicely done.

That is a really short, simple and a nice poem.

I like the way you've used imagery and the dynamic nature of your verses.

Keep Writing!