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I'm Gonna Laugh

Lindsaroo · 2007-09-23T06:43:34Z

Ok, a word to the wise, this poem is cursed. If you read it something terrible might happen. (Or not) It murdered a spider and I'm sure it can do far worse. ((No, this isn't one of those "My poem sucks. Don't read it." things.)) I just want to warn you all that it is capable of terrible things, but if you're fearless, then read it please. :) I'm gonna laugh When he stabs you in the back, And breaks your heart Like I told you he would. But you deserve it. And I'll be glad when he does it, Because you took him from me. Do you know how hard it is To see your best friend Go out with your crush? It hurts like my heart Was stuck in a blender And set on puree. But I've cleaned it out And now it's ready for you. You'll soon be alone But I'll have my new beau. I'm gonna laugh When you show me your tear-stained crap That you dare to call poetry. You think you are pretty But under all that make-up You look worse than the monsters That live under my bed. You think you have friends But they're worse than you. The second he leaves you Everyone else will too. Because they're gonna race To be his new girl. And you'll be tossed out Of your fantasy world. I'm gonna laugh When you take your life Because you think you're worthless And weren't good enough. No, I'm not that cruel. And I don't think suicide is funny, But your stupidity was. For no one will ever be good enough For that son of a bitch. But I knew to move on While he loved you...to death. My patern kinda skips from 4 lines to 3, but I just couldn't make it all one number, sorry.

Kim

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Fri Nov 16, 2007 6:01 am

Kim says... · Fri Nov 16, 2007 6:01 am

* is laughing my guts out*

this was by far the most intertaining poem i have read. you took the strong emotions we all feel, and put them on paper that actually made us smile. this was so great

just as intertaining was reading the comments, ok i have to go now, but stomach hurts. cant stop laughing.

kudos to you

kim

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