teller

teller, teller, tell me a tale
of love and fear and duty
i want to die in the arms of love
i want to die for beauty
for beauty is the only truth
and death the only lie
i want to sing a final tale
and love before i die

CHORUS
so tell me quick
if i've been heard
else maim with a phrase
kill with a word

oh prince oh prince give me a kiss
a kiss of love of desire
i want to lie in the arms of love
i want to sing of treasure
for passion is the only truth
and death the only lie
i want to know your lips on mine
and love before i die

CHORUS

so tell me quick
if ive been heard
else maim with a phrase
kill with a word

I liked this, the rhythm was pretty good and I liked the meaning behind it. In some lines though, you tend to cram them full of syllables that are not needed and it's harder to feel the flow of the lyrics.

I liked your imagery and I liked the chorus, which fit in well.

hehehehe me like this lol moosie

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I really like the chorus!

Very good.It is great. I have an Image in front of me.I can also make my own beat.

teller, teller, tell me a tale
of love and fear and duty
i want to die in the arms of love
i want to die for beauty
for beauty is the only truth
and death the only lie
i want to sing a final tale
and love before i die

Really liked this.

CHORUS
so tell me quick
if i've been heard
else maim with a phrase
kill with a word

Really liked this. Very intense in a way(Don't ask me how.)

Overall I think it is great.

maim?

I think you should capitalize your I's.