Nice beginning, but I agree with some of the others that it seems a little plain, or in my opinion a bit vague. I find it a little tricky to write in the narrative position, but you did a good job. I would suggest adding more about her thoughts and feelings. I wondered why she asked herself how she was going to get through... what? Well, it's the first chapter, but maybe you could explain a little more, and catch the reader's attention and make them want to keep reading. =]
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If you don't know it's impossible it's easier to do. And because nobody's done it before, they haven't made up rules to stop anyone doing that again, yet. — Neil Gaiman
