The mental.

The mental.

In the past, I herd stories of mental people.

I know that, methamphetamines can cause people to possess horrible hallucinations.

The most awkward story was of a person who thought, the FBI was watching him.

His statement was that, the FBI were watching him though a remote control, bugler alarm.

Now, I wonder why this was I believe he might have had some experience in the past were he had a run in with the law.

Or, it’s possible that he might have once had an occupation with the FBI.

It’s probable that, he could have had been smoking contraband.

Even though, I’m not a psychologist I thought I should inform people on this particular, topic.

Also, there are viruses that cause horrible, behavioral conditions.

For example, pandas the illness.

It makes people, possess horrible fears of one’s past.

I’ve been diagnosed, with this illness.

It made me recall, the fears of my past.

Elaborating, on the FBI conduction, there’s the chance that he, may have vowed stories on the particular, topic.

I recall, viewing stories on ghost hunting and wondering if, my house is hunted.

Hearing certain, stories on a topic continuously can cause these problems to be considered as reality in one’s mind.

I herd sorties about big foot and wondered if, he is out there watching me.

Continuous, series stick to your mind.

The stories make you worry.

You most, put your mind into theirs.

The FBI, is very classified but, do they possess the power to put a video chip into the system?

Sounds crazy, right?

I believe they could make any job possible if they wanted.

They have already taped some phones.

I know they can put cameras into pots.

But, do they have the power to put a transmitter into a bugler Aram?

I would say, no.

But, it’s probable.

The government is worried about terrorist.

But, would they go that far to put transmitters into bugler alarms?

NASA, can already talk to people in space.

I’m starting to go crazy over the notion.

There are so many, unexplained things in this world.

I’m gullible, for most notions.

I would like to meet this person in person.

To find out why, they think this way.

I think, they’ve been spied, on in the past.

Or, they do the same action.

Something is putting, the notion into their head.

I possess Aglophobia because, people in the past acted as if, they would hit me.

The mind reacts as if, they would do so.

I have fear now that, they’ll do so.

I witness, a lot of aggression.

I ‘m apocalyptic.

Also, the fear giving to you in the past stays with you.

Thus, making you believe it will return.

Or, if you see a ghost you may think, you will see them again but, do ghost really exist or is it, our mind messing with us?

Some people have the fear that wall are closing in on them. We know it’s not true but, to the person with the fear it appears to be so.

Repeated process if, something happened in the past to you or to someone else you think it will happen again.

I hear about, people getting sued for libel and slander so I think it will happen to me some day.

Knowing the danger.

In New York there is a lot of crime. When I carry money with me in New York I worry, that some fool for no good reason, might rob me.

Ask questions, think for days.

Murderess, The reason why people kill usually, people were neglected and abused simultaneously thus, this could contribute to their need for attention.

Or, they fell that people are evil. Their mind wants to play games with them.

The actions of others are outraging them.

They fell, the need to murder a person.

Bantering can cause hate.

Unwanted actions of other people can cause, this hate these needs to kill.

The felling, that they’re outcast.

Protection sometimes, makes people kill.

They fear that people are out to get them.

Out to hurt, banter, harass, them.

They’re addicted, to the satisfaction.

They no longer, care for the law.

The murderers mind, messes with them.

It makes them, hate everyone.

It brings, them happiness.

People tick them off.

To a sate were, their mind can no longer take it.

It makes them; think all people are the same.

Cannibals.

Some believe the human flesh is tasty.

Although, I wouldn’t.

They believe it’ll bring goodness to them.

Or, they eat the flesh, for survival needs.

Or, out of hate.

Could this happen to you?

Strep, is a known virus that lives in saliva. There have been cases where, the person diagnosed with the virus gets behavioral problems. People with strep, tend not to go out in public they fear that certain thing will happened to them. Strep can mess with the mind and give you mental problems. What can be done to stop Strep? You can visit your local doctor and get a shot or medicine.

Is anything being done to help these people?

There are mental constitutions that they can go to but, some mental conditions are nearly impossible to solve. At times, it can take more than, ten psychologists to come to an understanding of why, the person is acting in a certain way. There is medicine that doctors can prescribe to their patiences.

By Thething912. I tired to edit it the best I could but, if you see anything I would like, for you to correct it thanks. Please, review.

well there are lots of places where commas are placed and shouldn't be. you've got quite a few typos, and I'm a little curious why you all of a sudden put paragraphs at the end of it, but that doesn't matter so much.

I thought it was an interesting read. ^.^

For example, pandas the illness.

being that PANDAS is an acronym, you should write it like: PANDAS. And, I know it causes OCD (I had a friend who got OCD in this manner) but does it really, "makes people, possess horrible fears of one’s past."?

I'll second LAF, you have lots of commas where they shouldn't be, and sometimes your sentences just don't make sense. If you would like I can go through and point out line by line all the errors, but I won't do it unless you want me to ^_~ It's all stuff that I'm sure you could find on your own. Also, spell check is your friend.

This was... odd. I'm guessing you were trying to portray someone with PANDAs to lead into the warning at the end, but for me it didn't work that way because it didn't seem real. It didn't even make sense. I don't know a whole lot about strep/PANDAs beyond the fact that it can create Obsessive Compulsive Disorder. I'm not even sure it does all the other things you were talking about.

It was real stream of consciousness and jumped from one thing, to another, which made it kind of hard to read. If I understood more of why you were doing this, and what you were trying to create I might be able to better give you advice. I think the fact that all you did was telling, and in a real jumbled way, made it even harder to understand/relate to. If you were trying to give the reader the feeling that someone with these mental quirks would have, try writing it in a different manner, make them feel too. I wrote a story called Don't Panic (which is on YWS and you can go look at it if you wish) about an experience of mine, and I wrote it in a way so that the reader could understand, relate, and feel along with me. As a result, it was heart wrenching for a lot of people. You might want to take a look at that piece and see how you can also do that for yours--if that is what you were trying to do.

If you have any questions or would like that line-by-line, you can PM me.