I need to do more critiques

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So, here's the deal: I'm getting lazy in my critiquing. I'll log in, look through the new posts since I've been gone, then I play Sudoku or go into the chat. I want to break this habit of mine, because once school starts, I doubt I'll be able to get on much with the AP classes I'm taking.

SO!

Post a link to a story you think I should read. Doesn't have to be yours; maybe you read a story that you thought was AMAZERING and think I should think so, too (though I probably won't). I don't crit poetry much, but I think I can handle that, as well.

So...

Post away.




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There you go

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http://www.youngwriterssociety.com/topic19254.html - If you don't mind naked sirens, my sister would really appreciate a short comment on her art work.
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Sorry, but due to personal issues, I'm going to have to decline looking at a naked siren. But I'm sure it's good.




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No problem.
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i don't believe that is an actual link, but actually, just a copy.paste. but knock yourself out man. :)




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Just stories? Are you into poetry too?
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Goldenheart wrote:Just stories? Are you into poetry too?


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I don't crit poetry much, but I think I can handle that, as well.


Go for it. I'm trying to build up my crits, because I have a feeling I'll be posting more works than crits in the coming months.




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Em...I think that's a link...(I hope!). There's like nothing in my portfolio...should probably do something about that...
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Still accepting crit suggestions, as i'm finding myself with less homework than previously thought, along with less works (completed or in-progress).

After NaNo, though, there should be a huge boost...




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The three posted chapters of How You Break My Heart could do with some more crits. (The link is for chapter 1. You can find the other two chapter sin my portfolio.)

Thanks.
*Don't expect to see me around much in the next couple of weeks. School has started again, and it'll be a couple of weeks before I've settled in. If you've asked me for a critique, you will get it, but not for a little while. Sorry*




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That's a short story, go for your life. If you like, i can return the favour?




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"Markers" by Black Cat Sachiko.

A really cute story, and I'm the only one who's reviewed it so far. Pretty please! xD
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still taking suggestions (yes, i'm lame, but whatever :P)



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