Character Sketch for Lit. Class

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I finally finished this! Of course, I'm writing in on the last day I have >.< I'm real smart. If I could have a few proof readers or someone else who has read the book give me some pointers, I'd love them!

[pre]Character Sketch

The central theme of the novel East of Eden is that, as humans, we have the choice to do good or evil. In the book, Caleb Trask is the most influenced by this idea, and because of it, he is my favorite character.

Throughout the story, Caleb is forced to make decisions and to understand whether he is evil because it is in him to be evil, or because it is his evil. From Caleb’s childhood he’s mean to his brother, but not because enjoys being mean, but because he wants to be loved like Aron, his brother, is. “From his first memory Cal had craved warmth and affection just as everyone else does. If he had been an only child or if Aron had been a different kind of boy, Cal might have achieved his relationship normally and easily.” (440) I don’t believe Cal was ever evil as a child, because he just wanted to be loved and he couldn’t get it. He tried to make his father proud, but instead his father just thought little of him in comparison to Aron. Adam says, “…Do you know, Lee?—I’m proud of him. Terribly proud. This makes me feel good. I wish Cal had some ambition.” (484) Adam doesn’t even stop to think: does Cal have ambition? He assumes that he doesn’t because he isn’t like Aron. This is another thing that made me feel sorry for Caleb, and like him. He was the one to convince Aron to leave for college early. Aron doesn’t really have any ambition—Cal has ambition for him.

One of the reasons I like Caleb so much is because he’s human. The other characters are straight good or evil, but Caleb has the ability to do both. He prays to God, “Let me be like Aron. Don’ make me mean. I don’t want to be. If you will let everybody like me, why, I’ll give you anything in the world, and if I haven’t got it, I’ll go for to get it. I don’t want to be mean. I don’t want to be lonely.” (377) Even at a young age he didn’t want to be mean, when his meanness came from his want to be loved. Cal also knows when he does wrong, and he feels bad about it. “He knew that he had to tell his guilt to his father and beg forgiveness.” (565) This is something that Cathy never shows in the book. To me, Cathy symbolized Caleb’s evil side but this small want of his, the fact that he knows he should ask forgiveness, is what makes him different from her. He says to Cathy, “I was afraid I had you in me.” “You have,” said Kate. “No, I haven’t. I’m my own. I don’t have to be you.” “How do you know that?” she demanded. “I just know. It just came to me whole. If I’m mean, it’s my own mean.” (462) At this point in the novel, Caleb has realized that he is different than Cathy.

Paralleling the story of Cain and Abel, Caleb wants to win over his father’s love. To do so, he gets a job to make back all the money that his father lost in a bad attempt at shipping lettuce across the country. Even though it was an attempt to buy his father’s love, I still liked that Caleb did this. He tried for his father. Despite that, his father still thought little of him and felt like the money he had made was dirty, and he refused to accept that. “No. I won’t want [the money] ever. I would have been so happy if you could have given me—well, what your brother has—pride in the things he’s doing, gladness in his progress. Money, even clean money, doesn’t stack up with that.” (541) I felt so bad for Cal, because again he was compared to his brother. This was the last time that Cal would be compared to his brother; it drove him to fulfill his place as Cain and to emotionally kill his brother, and in the end be guilty for his brother’s death in the army.[/pre]
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Hi Claudette, I haven't read the book but I can give you some general pointers on structure and such -

From Caleb’s childhood he’s mean to his brother, but not because he enjoys being mean, but because he wants to be loved like Aron, his brother, is. [First fix the typo and then consider rephrasing this so that it's easier to read. Perhaps something like 'Throughout Caleb's childhood, he has mistreated his brother but this is arguably due to jealousy rather than the attainment of pleasure from being mean. Caleb wants the love and popularity that his brother, Aron, has.']

This is another thing that made me feel sorry for Caleb, and like him. [Maybe this would sound better if you linked it to the previous sentence like 'It is this neglectful behaviour that helps the reader to form an attatchment to Caleb through sympathy and understanding.']

“Let me be like Aron. Don’ [Is that how it is in the book or is that a typo? Make sure all your quotations are exactly like they are in the book down to each punctaution mark.] make me mean. I don’t want to be. If you will let everybody like me, why, I’ll give you anything in the world, and if I haven’t got it, I’ll go for to get it. I don’t want to be mean. I don’t want to be lonely.”

At this point in the novel, Caleb has realized that he is different than Cathy. [This is a little awkward. Either 'he is better than Cathy' or 'he is different to Cathy']

Despite that, his father still thought little of him and felt like the money he had made was dirty, and he refused to accept [s]that[/s] it

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I general, this is well written Claudette but I'm not sure about abreviating Caleb's name to Cal. Is that ever done in the book? I think it's a bit colloquial for a piece of homework/coursework. You make some really good points though and back up your arguement well.
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Thanks for the pointers!

Yeah, in the story, they mostly call him Cal. I might just go through and call him Cal throughout the whole piece, rather than switching back and forth. I couldn't really make up my mind.

That was a lot of help, you are awesome ^_^
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Hmm, dunno if you've turned this in already, but if you haven't, here're my two cents:


I don’t believe Cal was ever evil as a child, because he just wanted to be loved and he couldn’t get it.


I think you should rephrase the part in bold because it's grammatically vague. Like using "they" to refer to a single person instead of saying "he" or "she"

Aron doesn’t really have any ambition—Cal has ambition for him.


This sentence is vagueish, more conversational than is usually found in a paper. It's the "really", it makes your position on the subject less authoritative, however moot the point.

In paragraph three, you say that Caleb is capable of both good and evil; he prays to God...(quote)... but you don't really finish the argument and give a counterexample of when Caleb is evil; you talk vaguely about him being mean, but it isn't as complete as it could be.

Paralleling the story of Cain and Abel, Caleb wants to win over his father’s love. To do so, he gets a job to make back all the money that his father lost in a bad attempt at shipping lettuce across the country.


In this last paragraph, I'd make the connection between the two more detailed; you say they connect, then you tell what Caleb does, but you don't say which part he plays in the Bible story, etc.

g'luck with the lit class ^_^
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Ah, yeah, I turned this in. ^_^ but thank you anyway!!

I'll go ahead and lock this thread...
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