This may have no explicit content but it will be "R&quo

Welcome to my new rap,
music is my weapon, not a gat.
I'm spitting to you dad,
No mom I ain't mean or sad.
Yo dad you can't stop me,
I'm the definition of a true G.
There's Bigger things to discuss,
It's time to say bye and leave you in the dust.
Proof and 2Pac never died,
They are in my heart, and mind.
I know the beef will never die,
if you think it will, then that's a lie.
They say life goes by slow,
I spit fast like Twista fo sho.
It's up to me to bring the truth,
you can't run your mouth with one tooth.
I hate Bush and Laden,
When I come through my dad go hidin

Ugh.
Rap is okay, but this one, if made into real song, would be really bad.
SORRY!
It's just that rap is only good if it's:
A) Unique, like is talking about someone in particular and in an original way, like Lose Yourself (Eminem).
B) Has a message, like Where is the Love by Black Eyed Peas, that touches the listener and conveys it in a smart way.
C) Is just fun and connects everyone, like Gold Digger. It's also centered about one thing, not Bush and Laden/ 2Pac.

=O forget what they say....some work maybe it could be ok .......keep up the good work ^_^