Chasing the White Dragon

Hey all! Mmkay, sooo...I have a story called Chasing the White Dragon which is receiving few comments and I've asked once before and it still hasn't received any since I asked soo...here I am, begging. I honestly can't grow as a writer if no one is willing to critique- and if there is a reason as to why Chasing the White Dragon has been viewed more than 400 times but only received 4 comments or so <:cry: yes, I'm trying for some sympathy here. Hey, might work with someone! > I'd love to know to see how I can make it better. Here's the link to it, and I'd definitely appreciate it if you checked it out:

viewtopic.php?t=17193

And I definitely do intend on returning any critiques I receive, so pm me a link to whatever you need commented on and I'll do my best...and if I forget, then just pm me again, flood my inbox with a million messages I don't care

But anyways, thanks so much!

Hiya, hon. I often think that most of the time pressing people for critiques is annoying and will most likely lead to dearth. Four comments or so? That is a good number, trust me. Have some patience, I'm sure you'll get some more.



And, I'll take a look at your story, you've convinced me.



Ta,
Cal.

Please don't beg for critiques on the lounge. It would fill up the lounge if every person went here to beg. Please PM people who you want to critique your story. Most will do it for free, but if you get really desperate then you can make an arrangement with the CCF.

The best way to get critiques is to critique other people. Sharing is caring.

Hey....It's not desperation that draws people to the CCF. We give good crits.

And begging kinda throws people from wanting to crit.