Hourglass...new one, finally!

It was interesting... *turns laptop upside down* nope that didnt help..im a bit confused, but it kept me reading..it needs more...gret writing though:)

Favor for a favor great job Sam... i am too tired to point out mistakes or nything but.. otherwise good....

MONKEYS!!!

This isn't my favorite of the Hourglasses, but its nice. For some reason I don't like it when you use 'Tis' I don't why though. And this one was a tad confusing like when you write this:

I’m Thomas. What’s your name?” He absentmindedly asks, his attention mostly focused on George.

“I’m Luke.” Thomas’s head jerks upward.

“You’re the boy who…” He makes the motion of firing a gun, with a little ‘bang’ in it for dramitazation effects. I look down, uncomfortable.

“Yes.” Now, apparently unimpressed, he turns back to the worm.

“That mussa been scary.”

Huh???? you'll proably clear that up in the next chapters but it was a little confusing to read with out any backround.