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He looks pretty cool but his hands are different sizes and I'd like to be able to see his face. Also, the shading could be better, a bit more gradual but the colours are a good choice and generally, it's very well drawn.
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It looks cool. The arm with the pokeball is a bit to long. I see you tryrd to fix the show size but on is still bigger than the other.

Love the hair. Nifty little wind blown effect.
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This is really good. the pose is good and everything is in proportion thought i think that the left hand (your right) loks to big. Also it doesn't look like he is holding the pokeball. Very good though and the colours are fantastic.
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You might consider drawing on drawing paper, rather than notebook paper--it's hard to make the colors stand out like you want them too on notebook.

The hand is still a little large for my liking, and the absence of any eyes at all is odd, but I like your attention to detail.
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