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Alice
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Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:12 am
Alice says... · Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:12 am
And it was over, well, maybe not over, but you know what I mean right?
I just lost the game.
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Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:26 am
Writersdomain says... · Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:26 am
5/10 Might be me and my strange preferences, but it sounds informal in a kind of irritating way to me. Tis okay, I guess

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Alice
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Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:29 am
Alice says... · Sat Jun 30, 2007 2:29 am
6/10 it seems like its from one of those realization books.


"No worries, Jet, I'm not gonna kill myself yet, I've got one more tale to tell."
I just lost the game.
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