I think you need to finish colouring this before I can critique it properly but as it stands, it looks pretty cool. I'm not sure that Abrienne would walk with her legs crossed like that and I can't quite tell what she's carrying but I shall leave further comments for the finished version...
Wow! That is really god. All the shadying looks fantastic and it is really good. I like the expressions and the poses though i think that the legs crossed looks wierd. I think it will look better when it is coloured but at the moment it looks fantastic!
I can see you've done the wet clothes effect and it looks great. I think after you Colour it things will be uber sweet. And now they're pretty sweet anyway.
He looks a litte stalkerish with his eyes not done yet.
"Maybe Senpai ate Yuka-tan's last bon-bon?" ----Stupei, Ace Defective
