Ice Cubes #34

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Last edited by miyaviloves on Fri Jun 29, 2007 12:22 pm, edited 1 time in total.
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Oh my. I kinda guessed that it wasn't his baby but I never thought that this would happen....

I couldn't find any mistakes...YAY...so more comments rather than crit.

I really love Ice Cubes and your actual writing has improved. I just hope that the story all ties together and winds up well. (Not necessarily happy, just good writing...)

Can't wait for more,
Alainna
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very hard hitting. I was shocked.

And your writing has improved like alainna said if you look at teh old Cubes stuff and the new cubes it is very better writing in the new stuff :D :!:
Man:George look at this.
George: look at what?
Man: Ha made you look!
George: Idiot!



In a hole in the ground there lived a hobbit. Not a nasty, dirty, wet hole, filled with the ends of worms and an oozy smell, nor yet a dry, bare, sandy hole with nothing in it to sit down on or to eat: it was a hobbit-hole, and that means comfort.
— JRR Tolkien