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Philosophy of the Dark
Chapter 34
-Voices


The thoughts tumble in and out of my mind. What is going to happen? When will it be over? Will I ever be free?

Tammy’s evidence was flimsy, Ortega managed to make his
own. What will happen if I get said guilty? Is it even possible? Could I really
be blamed?

The sad truth is yes.

Maybe I can’t stay here, hoping for something better to come
along. I can’t keep wishing that things will change. I can’t keep listening to
the little voices inside me saying, “people change.”

People don’t change. Not for the better, not even for the worse.

The only thing that could change is a mindset, but the desire
will always be there.

He will always want to hurt me. And I will always be too weak to
fight back.



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Chapter Order:

30:3
34
30:4
35
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:!: COMING SOON!!!

Chapter 30:4 -The Verdict

haha, just kidding.
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Last edited by JC on Thu Jun 14, 2007 5:06 am, edited 1 time in total.
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So SHORT!!! And the verdict's next... Oh the suspense!!
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hehe. Yup, my shortest chapter yet! I should be done with the verdict tonight, so =D!!!
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Argh....the suspense is killing me!!!

Short but good, I'm fully submerged in your style of writing!

Keep it up and PM me when you post more as the portfolios are down!!

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hey JC! Looks like I was remiss for a while- I didn't see you'd posted more >.<

Oh the suspense! :D I can't wait to see what happens with the verdict, yet at the same time I'm nervous to find out. I'll say this for you- if anything, you're really good at making us care what happens to the character! hehe which at the moment could be good or bad- good for you, but bad for those of us who are now waiting on the edge of our seats for the verdict. >.< grrrr.........

anyway, good work, and hurry up with more for us XD

ta!

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hehe, okay. I'll be sure to tell everybody when I post the verdict, seeing as it's a big thing. Or is it??? OHH! The suspense! hehe. I'm actually almost done with that chapter, I might post some tonight. I'll see. =D

Once again, thanks for reading this everybody!
-JC
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This was really short... lol.


On another note, I'm finally reading in order =D
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hehe congrats!
=D
But that is not the question. Why we are here, that is the question. And we are blessed in this, that we happen to know the answer. Yes, in this immense confusion one thing alone is clear. We are waiting for Godot to come. -Beckett



Knowing too much of your future is never a good thing.
— Rick Riordan, The Lightning Thief