Young Writers Society

I really liked both of them
The first one would be better though if it was in foucus a little more and the coloring on the secound one but all in all I really like them

~Rory Lewis~

For the "want to escape" I think it would be great if a) the ticket sign wasn't there. and b) less colors. If this looked sorta abandoned, or empty, or something, then I think it would be great. The second pic. (don't be mad, but I already forgot the title), its kinda hard to tell what is what. I'm soooooo soooo soo sorry if that sounded rude. i didn't mean to be. I think they were great.

the first one reminds me of this movie i saw, its not a bad thing considering the movie was amazing. it had flash backs that resemebled something of what you have. i like it!!!