Young Writers Society

I'll add stuff as I go on, because my deviantart is kind of messed up right now and I only have two pictures up, due to the fact that I deleted everything before.

Anyway...Here's two of my pictures.

The first one's called "Trying to Escape" because the horses look like theyre trying to escape, it sort reflects what I was feeling at the time.
The second one is called "Never wanna let you go".



^this one, a guy almost bought at the wadworth exhibit that me and my friends made.



^models:
-My dog
-My cousin

I definitely like the first one the best, but it reminds me of a final fantasy sort of thing. It's pretty sweet.

The second one is okay. I'm not sure that the coloring on the boy was particularly great, i.e. the hat is very close to the color of his skin. And the dog is a little hard to see...as in I can't find his face. It's cute, but the tone is a little off. Still good though!

The first one is so cool... The merry go round is...bending. It looks like its running through time (<- that makes no sense) and makes me think of Something Wicked This way Comes even if I did hate that book. I love the picture.

I loved these photographs! Great Job! I especially like the second one. I don't know why but I liked it!

Good job!

Demi/OG/oregon

Dude...that first one is freaking awesome.

Very good.

I really liked the first one! Good job, second one needs some orginality, some how it feels like I've seen it before. [ sappy comercials]. I think if you changed the coloring a bit, it would be fanastic. First is very engaging.

The seocond one is neat for the different emotions or stories you could find within it, but the first one is even cooler, just because I'm amazed at how well you captured that image. Did you do anything to it or did it just turn out like that?

First photo is brilliant, brings the excitement of the fair alive. The colours blending as it goes faster is super!

The first one really does look like that Horse is running away and the second is nice but not as good.

I like them, theyre very good. The sort of stuff I saw at the year 12 art show I went to with my art class.

I think the first one would be better if any part of it was in focus. I know the carousel isn't supposed to be, and that works beautifully--but the background's all blurry and out of focus. That really doesn't work quite so well.

I like the first one. The distortion is fascinatingly mesmerizing... was it an accident of the camera or did you photoshop it?

The second one was good too, though. I like the moody introspectiveness it portrays. Very dramatic/cover of an emo CD. I wasn't quite certain what he was holding on to, at first, I just thought it was a dark spot, but once I squinted, it looks more like a giant ball of lint.

I still liked it.

Don't take that the wrong way... I liked it.

I love the first one.
The colors capture my eye.
Very nice.
Keep up the great work.

the first piece was very creative, i immediately thought of a short narrative that could perfectly accompany it.
the second piece to me was nostalgic in a sense, reminiscent of small town 1950 America.

I love them.
The mary go round is so cool looking. It looks like its about to spin right off of its hinges. I can't really see the horses. I like how you say they look like they are going to escape. Its cool.
The second one is nice. But I can't really see the dog. Its so true dogs are the best.
Nice work!
Genevieve