Wow. That really is heart breaking...Poor young kyle. Of course, I have so little knowledge of death, that I'm just kind of, "aww..." but I can't really feel with him. Still is sad, though.
she just wanted to make I remembered them.
missing the word 'sure'.
Keep writing, or I might flog you =D
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.” ― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo
This is really good, really moving. It confused me slightly at the start because I got the feeling that Kyle was quite old, like a teenager but then you went on to talk of how his mum picked him up and such. I think you definately picked a good part to involve the age. I really like your descriptions of the hospital, I got a really childlike feeling and I could relate, I hate hospitals. Please keep wriitng I really enjoyed reading this. Sorry I don't have anything more constructive to say
Kasie xxx
'The truly insane perform on many public stages. The sane stage their performance in the privacy of their own minds. Everyone is an actor. In the end, everyone wants applause.'
Madame Senetsky
Falling Stars by Virginia Andrews
Awww. Is this why Kyle is so Kyle? You'd said that the last flashback would tell why...now I actually understand. Maybe he's afraid to love someone, I mean he always seems to hurt the ones he loves and maybe it's because he's so accustomed to it. When I thought of Kyle, I never really thought about a family or brother or anything, I'd just think about Ariel, other women (Ch. Ref.) and well Jon. That's so sad:(. I wonder what was wrong with his brother though, at first I thought he was a vegetable but then he smiled and I knew that it was impossible. *cries* Poor Kyle!
~Rieda
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