"I don't know." She shook her head, not taking her eyes off him. "I've never been here before."
"Yeah. Right."
"Kyle."
Very Juliet xD
I wish you wouldn't have told me about the Juliet comparison, I kept seeing Juliet and thinking "ew" but then it snapped out, Sarah doesn't act like Juliet. She'd never say "har har" xD
I'm glad the presence came in... I thought they were going to do the naughty or something and, um, ew. It was weird enough when Jon and Ariel got it on. Please, no more random moments of intercourse.
“It's necessary to have wished for death in order to know how good it is to live.” ― Alexandre Dumas, The Count of Monte Cristo
I disagree Clau. If it's Kyle/Jon intercourse then it's okay, lol jk.
I would have never guessed that the presence would come in. I seriously thought that Sarah might be lying and that Ariel was coming in...or that Sarah was going to get up and choke Kyle to death. I guess the surprises are limitless.
Now I'm sort of freaked out though...they better not die, Sarah maybe, not Kyle though! Going to go read the next! Great job!
~Rieda
I love, love.
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