:O HEY! you posted it! lol. Just so you know, I like it. It sorta lost me when I read it earlier but after I read it agian I understood it. (that was just me not paying attention :p) But I like it Rieda! Keep it up.
*Lindsay*
"After it happened I thought that I'd just try to live as normally as possible and bury it, but things like that don't stay buried. I didn't think it would, but it taints your whole life."
"My desires were bestial, obviously." -Jeffery Dahmer.
The rhythm of this poem is really good and I like how it draws the reader in. I love the final line, it's very emotional and the whole extended metaphor of the light bulb is very imaginative.
