The line: Re-appearing

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stupidiot92
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Sat May 05, 2007 5:45 pm
stupidiot92 says... · Sat May 05, 2007 5:45 pm
Someone please Cirt my work. I haven't gotten any crit in a while. The title of my book that i am working on is The Line: Re-appearing(the title of this post).

PLEASE
It doesn't think, doesn't feel.
It doesn't laugh or cry.
All it does from dusk 'till dawn
is make the soldiers die
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hop exploded again, someone get the re-hopinator
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