Prosthesis #39 /P

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Ooo this was very nice and very different! I still don't know who this character is but I'm starting to really like her, and this shadow thing!

This plot is just taking so many interesting twists I love it! I also liked the thought that we were back in "civilization" you know, sex slaves and such. Instead of insane therapists and Jon/Kyle destroyers. Lol

Great Job!
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I love the French mythology you are adding in. I'd love it if you told me more on it. And those men? Creepy as ever! True end-of-the-world men for you...

And the thing? Ankou? Weeeeird. People shooting things? weeeeird. But always good.
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