Ice Cubes #17

Taken down due to publishing

Lol, I like the fact that this boyfriend might be gay...is it something Sappy is prone to?

I also like the jealousy...very realistic.

Keep going Meeves!!

Alainna
xxxxxxx

I only call her Sappy.

"I only call her Sappy," and "Only I call her Sappy," have two different meaning. See it?

“Oh, your into that are you?”

You're

“Lets go cinema!”

let's go cinema? Let's go to the the cinema makes more sense.

I like this Alan guy, just because of how Jaimy acts around him. Brillient. I couldn't love it more!

-JC

All finished with my editing now And handed in all of this so far to my teacher for my portfolio *gets nervous*. Thanks for reading this and helping me out with this And I'm going to continue it right now yay!

Oh and the numbers are all sorted and it order!

Meevs
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I liked this pices as well. All your pieces are amazing. It seems that Jamiy is gay probably because of Chris. However, he seems to like Sappy. Either as a friend or maybe something more.

xD We already know how this is going to start, so hey. -starts reading lol-

I think its natural

*it's

Sappy claps he hands excitedly

her hands?


its that relief that we will get into a fifteen film,

*it's

But I cant very well do that,

*can't

I think the main problem on here is just typing too fst and forgetting your apostrophes.