This is much more like a song, actually... a song with dancing. Which is pretty cool, if you think about it.
With that said, some of the parts don't really make sense. Like... the glands. I don't know. For me, it sounds kind of forced.
I actually like Part Three the best because it seemed the most honest, like you guys weren't trying as hard. And, for some reason, this made it sound much freer, which I like.
Hope that helps!
Ubi caritas est vera, Deus ibi est.
"The mark of your ignorance is the depth of your belief in injustice and tragedy. What the caterpillar calls the end of the world, the Master calls the butterfly." ~ Richard Bach
