Ice cubes #16

Taken down due to publishing

“So, your not going to be good,”

, should be a . you got it right in all the others, 'cept this one.

I hated to think his bastard was in my room, it made me feel sick and I wanted to attack his face with a pair of scissors.

This made me smile =D and laugh

weather I tell him or not,

Whether the weather is good, and whether the weather is bad...

What's with the italicized paragraph? What makes it different.

Make sure that your reader knows.

-JC

Oops i didnt mean for it to be in italics, its fixed now

I said in my last response, that it seemed like Chris had disappeared. Scrathc that. I liked how this piece was written. Jamit is very pesismistic and i can understand why. He aslo seems like he has a very high IQ. I am really liking how this is coming out.

Hey Meevs. This is getting better and better. I want to see Chris in jail now lol. Just a couple of small tihngs...

he didn’t hold me down by my wrists and whisperer harsh words into my ear.

*whisper?

“So, your not going to be good.”

*you're

He wont like that you have been smoking.”

*won't

He defiantly wont like that you have been fucking

*definately
**won't

And... that's all. I think I'll just go to the next part now. I need to find what happens to Chris lol.