They are so cute! It goes from really sad to a really happy moment. Is Kyle starting to remember things too?...or maybe that's just Jon remembering Kyle? Whatever it is I'm loving this Kyle/Jon action. Very sweet and emotional yet, they're not throwing each other onto the bed and doing the Kylish and Jonish things they do at those times . Lol, Tis still wonderful! Was that the werewolf thing that attacked Kyle? Or was it that disease that attacked him last time, I'm not sure. can't wait to read more!
~Rieda
I love, love.
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I agree with Reida they are very cute! Its really emotional, you have a way of getting the reader so attached to the characters! Look forward to reading more!
It's so troubling to see Kyle so near, so close. I feel like Jon (Which makes you amazing with skillz!) and every time Kyle hugs or touches Jon, I can feel it and I wonder: Is kyle going to disappear? Is he going to leave?
It's almost a feeling of: Is he going to leave us? Which proves your power. I have become one with Jon! Which means I am in love with Kyle. *giggles*
[To keep in line with your French] C'est beau!
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. Lol, Tis still wonderful! Was that the werewolf thing that attacked Kyle? Or was it that disease that attacked him last time, I'm not sure. can't wait to read more!
