Wow, that was a twist. I never knew that he had a brother. I really like that twist. As for the Chris thing, i like how it is in there but i really really hate Chris. I hope something really bad happens to him. I mean really really bad. I look forward to reading the rest of Ice cubes.
It doesn't think, doesn't feel. It doesn't laugh or cry. All it does from dusk 'till dawn is make the soldiers die
/I think, today,/ he thought back, /the important fact is that I don't/ need /to be better than him. He can just be a person. And I... I can just be one too./ — Adolin (Wind and Truth by Brandon Sanderson)