Prosthesis #27 /P

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Kyle! Jon is even more sane now! Now he has to show Kyle the way. I'm wondering if, that is the real Kyle though, becasue Jon was thinking that they set him up. I'm not sure but this is the best plot that I've ever read.

I'm glad that I found out that they were setting him up and that he understands it though because it shows that he's getting better and that he's figuring things out!

I hope that Kyle is real, I really really hope that Kyle is real! I can already tell that it's having somewhat of a good effect of Jon, the only bad thing being that he doesn't know if Kyle is really alive or not.

I can't wait to read the next Brad!

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Gah Kyle better be real, I think he is though anyway I'm off to read #28!

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golly goodness.

This is like joy, and joyness... And yes, I second the fact that kyle better be real!

I love how Jon seriously believes he is crazy now. Such a change, yet you do it believable.
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