Awww, this is so sad! Jon is almost completely and utterly broken. I have no idea how he'll turn out after this. I feel so bad for him . The connections you've created between your character and your readers have become so strong. I cried during this. I KNEW he wasn't better when I saw his reaction to the world around him, he seemed so broken and repressed. He showed no emotion and yet I knew he had so much inside of him. Kyle and Ariel and the baby dead? And then HE killed them? I remember none of this happening and watching him go along thinking he caused all this pain to Kyle, Ariel AND himself is so sad. I hope that all of this is fake, really. It would be terrible to find out that he actually did all of this. Or even if Kyle is dead at all, *shudders* This is great Brad! Can't wait to read the next!
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